After the last update, I did more to the guitar accompaniment and also tried to solve the rhythmic problem maybe in bars 32 – 40. “We will survive” seems to want to be the big statement but drifts back into standard verse line before it peaks, survive da-da-darr sort of thing, also I’m close to getting it mixed up with another song here and I pull it out of it before it becomes too obvious.
By this, I mean that the poem structure here is not as straightforward as it seems.
While bars 24 – 31 worked out OK with just a straight forward 4/4 strum.
Well, I think it’s almost finished, what do you think?.