Song collaboration; Chris Hall

After the last update, I did more to the guitar accompaniment and also tried to solve the rhythmic problem maybe in bars 32 – 40. “We will survive” seems to want to be the big statement but drifts back into standard verse line before it peaks, survive da-da-darr sort of thing, also I’m close to getting it mixed up with another song here and I pull it out of it before it becomes too obvious.
By this, I mean that the poem structure here is not as straightforward as it seems.
While bars 24 – 31 worked out OK with just a straight forward 4/4 strum.

Well, I think it’s almost finished, what do you think?.

chris hall poem 20.06

Author: blackbird212012

I am interested in multimedia work: songwriting, art, and creative writing. I have been involved also in theatre and music performances.

One thought on “Song collaboration; Chris Hall”

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s