Hawk spirit girl

G D
Hawk /spir-it /girl
Watching me from the sky
Like a
Satellite spy

My open port eye
Streams
Like a
Rodeo Jill
Rides my wild dreams

Small like a breath
Along the red irrigation canals
In the warm heat of the sun
She finds her pray

Hawk spirit girl
On her fast highway
Realises
A breath
Of life
Like an earthly meteorite
To my dark and cratered side

To land down
Like a cat
That calls to be let in

The first line has an obvious musical rhythm so I’ve tried it in key of G and seems ok.

Who is Hawk spirit girl? Why end the poem with a cat wanting to be let in? What is this crazy poem about. I think its network of images would work as a song anyway with a little tweaking.

Author: blackbird212012

I am interested in multimedia work: songwriting, art, and creative writing. I have been involved also in theatre and music performances.

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